I’d like to announce that my poem “Exhale” has been published at Chewers & Masticadores. A big thank you to Nolcha Fox and her team for sharing this piece with their readers. It’s always an honor and a delight to be published alongside some amazing writers at Chewers & Masticadores, so thanks so much, Nolcha!
“Exhale”
“A handful of words hastily shaken
Thrown like dice against a filthy brick wall
Skittering across deserted sidewalk
Bouncing into foul gutter rill
Profound thoughts from a tired mind…”
I’d be pleased if you’d read the rest of my poem by clicking this link. Also, be sure to follow and subscribe to Chewers & Masticadores. It’s a wonderful place for those who love writing.
I feel this so often myself ❤️
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Thanks a bunch, Michelle, for your kindness. I’m sorry to hear you feel this way often, too. The need to create is powerful for some people, and it feels wonderful to do so, but the downside of self-doubt and wondering if what we create has any merit or meaning can be soul-crushing. I think creating art is a noble cause, and worthy of pursuit despite the setbacks along the way. Even if only one person is moved by what we create, it’s worth it, I think. I appreciate you and your art, my friend. 🙂
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So true, if even one person is moved I’m over the moon about it. 🙂
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Great job, much deserved recognition, Mike!
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Thank you kindly, Friedrich, for your constant support. Truly grateful to you, good sir! 🙂
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Congratulations Mike. So beautifully written poem, I have already read it on your page but love to read it again and again:) I was waiting for your post and checking the notification regularly:) Would love to read your new essays too👍:)
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Kindest thanks, Saima. You’re always so generous with your comments and it means the world to me. Much appreciated. 🙂
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Congratulations, Mike! 👏🏻👏🏻🥳🥳 I live your work, and this poem is poignant and beautifully penned. ❤️ I hope you are doing well. Take care, my friend.
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Thanks so much, dear Filipa. I’m glad you found this poem to your liking despite its melancholy theme. I hope autumn is treating you generously, my friend. I appreciate you so much. 🙂
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Devastating but so incredibly elegant. 🌷
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Thank you, my friend. Being dogged by self-doubt and insecurities isn’t fun, but I’m glad I can write about it to sort of compartmentalize it and put it into perspective. I love the feeling of creating something from nothing despite the nagging sensation of futility that accompanies it. I appreciate you and your kind words as always. 🙂
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The emotion slowly building up to an almost unbearable pain. An emotive piece.
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I’m truly grateful for your kindness, Cassa. It means a lot to me as both a writer and a person. I’m happy to know this piece connected with you. Much appreciated, my friend. 🙂
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You are welcomed. Your work touches me.
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Congratulations,My friend. Very nice write up poem. I like. Tack care! I hope you are doing well my friend 💖!
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Many thanks to you, dear friend! I’m glad you liked this poem and I appreciate your wonderful comments. Here’s wishing you a wonderful week ahead and a happy October! 🙂
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You are most welcome my dear t. Thanks lot. Have go head October!♥️
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A deeply heartfelt piece, Mike. (I left a longer comment at Masticadores). < Congrats on another publication. It's always wonderful to see your name pop up on my screen and know that there's a poem waiting for me.
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Thanks as always, Diana. Your support means so much to me and keeps me invested in writing and creating. I hope October in your part of Oregon is as beautiful as I remember it from my time there. Thanks again for your kindness, my friend. 🙂
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Congratulations, Mike! What an amazing poem that immediately pulled me in with its rhythmic and important message.
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Thank you so much, Layla. I’m glad this poem resonated with you and I so appreciate your kind support, my friend. Means a lot to me. 🙂
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oh wow Mike I love the start to this awesome Poem. well deserved and compelling. Can’t wqit to read all. Congratulations💓
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Thanks, Cindy. I hope you enjoyed the full poem over at Chewers & Masticadores. 🙂
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I have to go look now Mike.. I’m a bit behind.., so sorry. Whatever you write, I love💞🫶🏽
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This is gut-wrenching but incredibly beautiful, Mike!🥲😮 “I have lost my voice so often I can no longer hear my thoughts”! Wow! I can relate to this feeling. Congratulations on the publication.✨️
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Thanks a bunch, Aaysid. You’re always so kind. I’m sorry that you can relate to parts of this poem. The futility of writer’s block and the self-doubt as to whether we actually have anything worth saying can be devastating for creative people. Reading inspiring poetry written by talented authors such as yourself and others here on WP helps a lot to get me back on track. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and wonderful support so much. Many thanks! 🙂 *tips cap*
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I agree, Mike. It is good to be among creative and kind people. Thank you, and it is always a pleasure reading your beautiful, soulful poetry.😊
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Mike, that’s a powerful essay. As a guy with moderate-ish hearing loss now mostly corrected with hearing aids, I understand what you’re saying about isolation. My feelings of other-ness rose dramatically as i heard less and less of what people were saying to me. I’m looking forward to future essays. Your writing is wonderful to read in topic and voice.
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Many thanks, Jeff, for your thoughtful words. I’m sorry to learn you must deal with hearing loss, too, but glad to know hearing aids help. I had hearing aids in 1985 and again in 1990 and there was no improvement at all. Everything was amplified, but my difficulty in understanding speech was unaffected. I FINALLY received a proper diagnosis in 1994 when the country’s top audiological specialist told me I had an auditory processing problem, which is different than a normal hearing loss. At some point between my inner ears and the hearing processing center in my brain, the electrical signal was being corrupted or dying off. He informed me that hearing aids and implants wouldn’t remedy the situation and that my deafness would continue to progress until I eventually become totally deaf. So, it’s been a long, steady descent into deafness, with some accelerated patches along the way. The isolation really is the worst part overall, and the feeling that no one understands or really cares. Being stuck between the hearing world and the deaf world is a really weird and frustrating place to be.
Anyway, I really appreciate your kind words, Jeff. Thanks for taking the time to read my essays, and I hope you’ll enjoy the upcoming installments. There are six in total, but I may write more about my deaf experience later on. I’m glad you stopped by and hope to see you visit again. 🙂
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Great👍 Beautifully written👏👏 Way to go!
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Thank you so much, Vipanjeet. I truly appreciate you and your kind support. I hope you have a good rest of the week! 🙂
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