(c) 2022 by Michael L. Utley
(#235)
so much damage done
by such delicate fingers
and a blackened heart
…..
(#236)
how soothing the words
whispered to a shattered heart
by her serpent’s tongue
…..
(#237)
days of green silence
heart fern-bound in oak shadows
dreaming with the trees
…..
(#238)
I have not yet reached
terminal velocity
my life in free-fall
…..
(#239)
carved into the bark
of my heart, her initials
overgrown with grief
…..
(#240)
bright sun hurts my eyes
just as hope singes my soul
best to stay inside
Relatable.
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Thanks, Garry. Yeah, I imagine some of these are pretty universal. Thanks for reading and commenting. Much appreciated π
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This one in particular really hit me, Mike. Incredibly powerful imagery.
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Thanks, David. I remember walking through an aspen grove on a nearby mountain years ago, seeing those white tree trunks covered in initials. It’s been seven years since my last relationship ended and this was the image that came to mind. I never carved her initials on a tree trunk but they were certainly etched in my heart. Thanks for such a kind comment, good sir. I always appreciate hearing from you. π
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I absolutely love each and every one of these, Mike. Your talent shines, my friend. Thanks for sharing .π
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Thanks so much, Grace. Your wonderful support always brightens my day. So glad you liked these. Thanks a million! π
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My pleasure.π
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Yes, all of them. Wow!
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Thanks a bunch for such an enthusiastic appraisal! It made me grin, and I appreciate it so much. Thanks for your kind support. It make a difference. π
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how soothing the words
By serpent tongue
Wow ironically perfect in today’s times
That’s reality undiminished,πβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thanks, Reena. You’re right–those venomous words from the serpent’s tongue can come from anyone, from a devious romantic partner to the former president of the United States. When we’re vulnerable, it can be hard to resist the tempting lies from unscrupulous people. I had in mind some experiences I had with some horrible former girlfriends, but it can apply to anyone who wishes to deceive us. “Reality undiminished” is a perfect way to put it. I always appreciate your insight and wisdom. Much appreciated. π
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Oh Mike… β€β€β€
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Thanks, Filipa. Glad you enjoyed these. π
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Absolutely Mike! Some of them resonated so strongly to me. ππ€
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Each and every one it is filled with such dept of emotions. “how soothing the words
whispered to a shattered heart
by her serpentβs tongue” ain’t this the reality of today, splendid my friend. π
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Thank you, Daphny. I always appreciate your kind comments. Glad you liked these. π
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You’re most welcome, Mike! I always enjoy your photography as well as reading your words. π
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These are great haikus, Mike, both poignant and inspiring. You write your poems great skilfulness and artful onservation. Ever so amazing!
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Many thanks, Lamittan. I appreciate your constant support, my friend. π
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You’re most welcome, Mike my friend. π
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These are beautiful, Mike. I love your haiku. #237 is my favorite… oh, to be dreaming with trees. β€
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Thanks so much, Diana. Trees are magical, aren’t they? I’m rather fond of them, as you can probably tell. π
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They are so much more amazing than we think. π
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These are brilliant as always!ππ
#237 is incredibly beautiful; “green silence” What a fascinating concept!
I relate to #240 the most – I, too, avoid the sun for similar reasons.π
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Thanks a bunch, Aaysid. “Green silence” seems to encompass everything I feel about trees. Peace, contemplation, tranquility…and green is such a soothing color. I’m happy that you enjoyed these. π
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I truly did. You are very welcome, Mike.π
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Loved these haikus Mike. π Especially #237 and #239, I can see that tree in my mind.
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Thank you kindly, Kirsten. I’m glad these connected with you. Yes, those two tree haiku just jump out at me when I re-read them, too. Thanks for your kind words as always. π
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Your poems always resonate in our hearts, for we have all felt these emotions you write of, Mike. The imagery you evoke is stunning, my friend. βΊοΈ
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Thanks, Jeff. I truly appreciate your wonderful words of support. Glad you liked this selection. Much appreciated. π
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Youβre welcome, Mike. Itβs always my completely pleasure. Happy weekend. π
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Amazing haikus Mike.
I like David loved these lines
carved into the barkβ¨of my heart, her initialsβ¨overgrown with grief
ππ
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Many thanks, Cindy. Glad you enjoyed this one. π
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