“Thus the Evening’s Stillness Deepens” published at MasticadoresIndia

On By Mike U.In Poetry

I’m pleased to announce that my poem “Thus the Evening’s Stillness Deepens” has been published at MasticadoresIndia. I’m so grateful to Terveen Gill and her team for their support and kindness in publishing my poem. Terveen’s peerless enthusiasm for creative writing is inspirational on so many levels. I’m both delighted and humbled to have my poetry included at MasticadoresIndia. Thanks a bunch, Terveen!

“Thus the Evening’s Stillness Deepens”

“I don’t want to break the peaceful
stillness of this winter evening
as the gloaming deepens and the
shadows freeze upon the hills…”

I’d be grateful if you would check out the rest of my poem by clicking this link. Also, be sure to follow and subscribe to MasticadoresIndia–it’s a wonderful place for those who love writing.

46 thoughts on ““Thus the Evening’s Stillness Deepens” published at MasticadoresIndia”

    1. Hey, Lamittan! Good to see you again, my friend. Thanks for your kind words. I hope the world is treating you well. Winter here has been snowy, which is just what this drought-stricken region needs. I much prefer springtime, however I find winter to be the most inspiring season as far as poetry is concerned. Thanks for stopping by and take care, my brother. 🙂

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      1. Thank you, my brother. Yes despite the heat and sweat here, my family and I are pretty fine. Glad to hear from you too. I suppose winter inspires much poetry too, cause “when icicles hang by the wall and Joan the cook doth keel the pot, when the owl sings tuu-wit, a merry note”, as so says Shakespeare, then poetry flows more and more through our veins. And yours is a true example. Thanks and have a great time, buddy. 😇

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    1. Thank you kindly, Terveen. I’m most grateful for your support and the opportunity to share my poetry with your readers. It’s always such a thrill to see my work at MasticadoresIndia. Much appreciated. *tips cap*. 🙂

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  13. Well done, Mike! The imagery in this is very lyrical – almost old-fashioned. I think that’s because of the range of vocabulary you choose. I feel drawn into the space, I feel the cold, I see the rising moon. I hope you don’t mind me saying, it reminds just a little of LM Montgomery – the beauty and the softness and perhaps even the personification.

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    1. Thanks so much, Jo. You’re an astute reader–I did indeed see this setting in an antiquated light. There’s a feeling of an older time here, and I pictured both the moon and the narrator dressed and behaving accordingly. It just seemed to match the emotions that were running through my mind as I wrote this.

      Embarrassingly enough, I was unfamiliar with LM Montgomery so I googled the name and was like, “Oh, Anne of Green Gables!” I’ve definitely heard of this but haven’t read it. My older sister is a big fan, however.

      Thanks for your kind words. Much appreciated. 🙂

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    1. Thanks so much, Aaysid. Your always-kind reviews are so inspiring. Truly glad to know you liked this one. (My computer died so I’m typing on my old Nexus 7 tablet with one finger! 😀 I’m so far behind in all my WordPress stuff…). Much appreciated, my friend. 🙂

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    1. Hey, David. Thanks for such a nice comment. Honestly, I get lost in my poetry (and prose) while writing and I sort of just go where the words take me. I’m so often surprised at where I end up. It’s always an adventure. I’m so glad to know this one kept you hooked throughout. I hope the world is treating you well, good sir. Greetings from cold and snowy Colorado! 🙂

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