I’d like to announce my poem “The Trunk” has been published at Gobblers & Masticadores. Many thanks to Juan Re Crivello and Manuela Timofte and their staff for this opportunity to share my poetry with their readers. I’m sincerely grateful. Thank you, Juan and Manuela!
“The Trunk”
(c) 2021 by Michael L. Utley
“There is a place for things
That don’t belong in
Other places
That sere and weathered
Trunk that hunkers lupine-like
Amid dust-addled attic shadows
Wood split and gouged
With time and neglect
Iron bands and fittings
A crumble of rust
Lockless clasp broken
From endless breeches
And pryings
I should have
Replaced that lock
Eons ago…”
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Well done, Mike! I am very pleased to see how active you are and that your wonderful work is being recognized. Keep on rocking!
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Thank you kindly, Friedrich. I’ll have you know, I shall never stop rocking! 😄🎸 I appreciate you, my friend. Many thanks for your continued support. 😊🙏
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Congrats Big Mike!
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Thanks, Ernie, for the kind words. Much appreciated. 😊
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Congratulations , Mike. Wonderful 💕
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Kindest thanks, Grace. Truly grateful for your presence, my friend. 😊🙏
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Always a pleasure 💕
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Behind every word I could feel the buildup of frustration. So relatable, the inner fight never ends. I’m thankful for everything you write because I know I am not alone in my own struggles. Keep on writing, fighting, delighting… 😊
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very thought provoking poem Mikey..had me considering what I treasure for all the wrong reasons, and what I refuse to truly address. The trunk holds the good and the bad for me. I also left a comment on Masticadores.
wonderful poetry as always my friend. 🙏💪
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Thank you, Michelle, my friend. It truly is comforting to know we’re not alone. I sometimes have an inner struggle with myself about whether I should hit that Publish button because I write such dark stuff, but part of me realizes it’s a way to let others know they’re not alone. When we hurt, sometimes the pain is alleviated just a little when we know others are going through something similar. There’s solidarity, a human connection, and we can share compassion, knowing we have a little bit of understanding with regards to our common human pain. I know what it’s like to feel alone, and I don’t want anyone else to experience that emptiness.
I appreciate you. Michelle. Your friendship means the world to me. Thanks so much for your kindness. 😊
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Left a comment over there, Mike!! Very nice on this, it felt like the same trepidation of chillie willies I get when I’m going through old trunks/treasure chests. Mine are usually small so I don’t buildup too much “my precious-es.” I always have an air of anxiety but hope when I open the box. I felt this same mentality reading this. Honestly, I got a bit of a sense of Poe in “Tell-Tale Heart” when he was trying to close the trunk and pop on top of the floorboards !!!. I enjoyed it very much, Mike. I really like the direction your writing and what you’ve been sharing with us has taken, my friend 😄👏
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Thanks, Sam. ”The Tell-tale Heart” was my first experience with Poe. I think it was in junior high–a reading assignment–and what a cool story to be “forced” to read by my English teacher. I dig dark imagery and writing about things most people probably don’t want to consciously ponder, so Poe’s work is right up my alley. I’m pretty sure we all have a trunk like the one in this poem, and its contents are probably a mixed bag of regret, shame, guilt, happiness, etc. It’s hard to sort though a lifetime of stuff, but if we don’t, we suffer in the end.
Thanks for your kind words, my friend. 😊
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I gotta agree, but it’s worth it all the same going through those trunks. Lots of highlights, memories that seem so distant, and broken junk that don’t mean it’s junk but don’t let the junk compile so heavily. I always think of “Diggin’ Up Bones” by Randy Travis when I’m doing the dance with the buildup of my precious-es and broken junk. Usually playing it too, haha. Spring Cleaning is around the Corner, anyways!! I wait until NC hits only 80s and above, then I start the decluttering process. I’m drowning in my secondhand resource decor and t-shirts galore. The t-shirts process always scares me bc those of my livelihood and joys, though the process must commit… Anyways, wonderful piece, my Friend!! 😄😊😌
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Congratulations, Mike, on another wonderful piece showcased. I have a feeling that many have a ‘trunk’ they struggle to keep shut. Evocative writing, as always. 🤗
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Kindest thanks, Lauren. Yeah, we all have cluttered attics and there’s inevitably a rather sinister dusty trunk in the corner that needs sorting. It takes courage to pry open the lid and look inside, but how else can we move on in our lives if we cling to things we need to throw away? Bad memories, regrets, guilt, shame…all of it lingers unless we deal with it at some point.
Thanks for your stalwart support, my friend. I appreciate you. 😊
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You’re always welcome, Mike, and I agree, we have to, at some point, pry open the lid and face the things that cause havoc in our hearts and minds. Your poem expressed this so well. ❤️
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Congratulations, Mike!
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Thanks aplenty, Kymber. I truly appreciate your kind support. 😊
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Well done, Mike! 🏆 I’ve commented on G&M also but we no longer have a trunk! After so many moves it collapsed (it belonged to my parents before me).
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Many thanks, Ashley. A solemn RIP to your erstwhile trunk. Sounds as though it served its purpose well for a long time. 😊
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Wonderful, and congratulations!👍👍
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Thanks so much. Truly grateful, my friend! 😊
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Well done!!! Kudos to you for being published!
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Thanks a bunch, Madison. I appreciate your kindness! 😊
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wow your doing great pal.. well done..
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Thank you kindly, William. Very much appreciated, my friend. 😊
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Fantastic! Congratulations!
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Thank you, dear friend! I hope your week is going well! 😊🙏
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Most welcome My dear friend. Yes, going very well. And How’s your?
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I’m doing okay, my friend. Spring has arrived and it’s really warming up (76 degrees F at the moment), the skies are clear and blue, and everything is green again. Good times. 😊
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Nice you give me good news the skies are clear and blue, and everything is green again. Good times. Iam so…so happy my dear friend. Tack care. God blessing!
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Heading over to read…
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Thanks so much, Annette. I really appreciate your constant support, my friend. 😊
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Congratulations, Mike! A beautiful execution of a haunting idea! Another one of your masterpieces. ✨️🤩 I find trunks scary and prefer them to stay locked, unrattled, and forgotten.😪
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Thanks, Aaysid. I agree about those trunks–I’d like to forget they exist if possible, but alas, l end up digging through them, trying to figure out my life. At least poetry is a result, even if it’s dark poetry. Perhaps eventually I can just recycle the claptrap thing and get rid of it once and for all. 😄
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Mike, congratulations on another published poem! Well deserved! I love the trunk analogy of all those things we hide away but can’t really let go of or forget, we can’t keep it under lock and key.
We continue returning to the trunk even though we don’t want to. A well crafted poem that most of us can relate to.
Bravo, my friend!
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Thanks, Peggy. Fortunately, my real-life trunk isn’t as sinister as the one in my head–it’s just filled with books! That mind-trunk, however… I’m still digging through it after all these years, trying to sort it out and get rid of what I shouldn’t hold onto. Writing helps a lot. It allows me to handle one thing at a time and hopefully find a way to deal with stuff more easily.
Thanks for your kind support as always, my friend. It’s always a delight to see you stop by to say hello. 😊
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Your imagery and ability to create metaphors is always superb, Mike. Congratulations on continuing to write and publish impactful poetry. 👏🏻
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Kindest thanks, Michele. Your words of support always brighten my day. I appreciate you! 😊
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I feel the same, thank you Mike. A wonderful connection we have. 🙏🏻
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Congratulations, Mike! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Thank you kindly, my friend. I appreciate you! 😊
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You’re on a roll… i can’t keep up.
Congratulations💕
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Thanks so much, my friend. I appreciate you. 😊
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