I’d like to announce my poem “Platitudes” has been published at Gobblers by Masticadores. I’m grateful to Editor Manuela Timofte and her staff for sharing this poem with their readers. Thanks so much, Manuela!
“Platitudes”
(c) 2024 by Michael L. Utley
“the yoke of burdensome veracity
does not comport with those whose vapid souls
would congregate toward lies like moths to flame
and frenzy-feed on poison from the troughs
of those who wish to lead all men astray
thus in the end your heaven’s impotence
could not redeem this unabating hell
and all your pithless ersatz platitudes
lay shattered in inconsequential heaps
the dross of feckless minds and futile means
and though you crow
This truth I know!
as you insist
you ken the gist
of edicts straight
from heaven’s gate
your craven heart
betrays you…”
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Beautiful written you. Congratulations
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Thanks so much, my friend. I appreciate your kindness and hope you’re doing well.😊
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Most welcome my dear friend! Iam good & u?
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I’m doing fine, my friend. Looking forward to cooler weather as autumn approaches. 😊
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Thanks,Tack Care my friend 😄!
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Congratulations! This is wonderful!
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Kindest thanks, Kymber. I appreciate you and your support. I hope your week is a good one, my friend. 😊
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It’s my pleasure, Mike. I hope your week is a good one too. 🌺
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Wow. Incredibly powerful, Mike; dare I say this poem is even more arresting and (convicting!) than “Ozymandias”!
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Thank you kindly. You know, I’d never read “Ozymandias” until you mentioned it here (I darted off to Poetry Foundation’s website to check it out) and it really left an impact on me. I can only hope the blight and bluster of the particular modern-day Ozymandias mentioned in my poem is rendered impotent and soon buried ‘neath the sands of time as well (along with his orange spray tan and golden toilet). 😊
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You’re welcome, but thank YOU for your exquisite work!
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I will check it out
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Thanks, Annette. I hope you enjoy the full poem, my friend. 😊
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I like the way you write
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Thanks so much, Joanne (and my apologies for a tardy reply). I appreciate your kind comments so much. 😊
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Congrats, Mike. I’m heading over to read the full poem. 🤗
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Thanks a bunch, Lauren. I appreciate your wonderful support. 😊
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Congratulations, Mike! Bold and powerful and full of truth, my friend! Our country is in a tough place, but you courageously call it like you see it. I hope we all have eyes to see and ears to hear…
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Thanks so much, Peggy. It’s a fraught time, indeed. I hope we can pull through in one piece and choose compassion over chaos. Your constant support is very much appreciated, my friend. 😊
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Very nice! 🙂
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Many thanks for your kind support. I appreciate it so much. 😊
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My pleasure, Mike!
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Your kind support is golden, Manuela. I appreciate everything you do. 😊
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Thank you, Mike! I am glad I can bring happiness around me! 🙂
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Congratulations Mike❤️
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Thanks a bunch, Michelle. I appreciate your kindness, my friend. 😊
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Wow, powerfully evoked, Mike. It feels like a complete poem here with every word layering on the next. Congratulations!💓
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Thanks, Cindy. This one is intense, for sure. I felt the need to speak out against the chaos that’s threatening this country. I’m just a guy who likes to write, but hopefully words have power and can change lives, you know? Thanks for your constant support, my friend. 😊
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And so important at that Mike. It’s appalling and i’m sitting with a post for fun fri-Yay now I’ve curtailed some but my husband says scrap but not sure that I can.. oh life.. words do have power, especially yours💓
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I left a comment over there.
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Thanks, Dawn, for your support. I appreciate you. 😊
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👏❤️👏
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Thank you kindly, Linda! 😊
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Always a pleasure my friend – hope you’re doing OK! L xx
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Heading over to read the rest, Mike. A powerful start.
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Many kind thanks, Diana. I appreciate you. my friend. 😊
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