Hey, everybody. Just a note to let you know my poem “The Trunk” is now live at Manuela Timofte’s blog In A Love World. My sincere appreciation goes to Manuela for her generosity in sharing this poem.
“The Trunk”
(c) 2021 by Michael L. Utley
There is a place for things
That don’t belong in
Other places
That sere and weathered
Trunk that hunkers lupine-like
Amid dust-addled attic shadows
Wood split and gouged
With time and neglect
Iron bands and fittings
A crumble of rust
Lockless clasp broken
From endless breeches
And pryings
I should have
Replaced that lock
Eons ago
The ill-fitting lid
Is too loose
More decoration
Than function
And tends to rattle
Of its own accord
Far too often
For what’s inside wants to
Breathe
Stretch
Pop knuckles
Champ teeth
And feed
And only I can
Contain it…
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Excellent, Mike — and congrats yet again!!!
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Thanks, Carol–yet again! How’s springtime treating you? Have the heat and humidity set in yet? Looks to be hot and dry here (again) this year (the Colorado River is in serious trouble, too). Have a good upcoming weekend, will ya? 😊
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Well, the Northeast has had a lot of rain as usual this Spring, but we’re still in drought.. Other than that, I have a tower heater and a big round fan plugged into the same power strip. 🙃 Wishing you a great weekend, too, Mike — thank you!
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Congratulations, Mike. Heading over …
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Thanks, Robbie, for your wonderful support. Much appreciated. 😊
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🌈💖
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congrats, mike. i left a comment there, powerful poem
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Many thanks, Beth. I appreciate you. 😊
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Congratulations Mike.
Your poem resonates deeply with me.
Brilliantly written.
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Kindest thanks, Maggie. I wish poems about depression didn’t resonate with anyone, you know? I’d prefer no one else understood what that particular darkness is like. Your kind support is invaluable, my friend. Wishing you a good Friday and upcoming weekend. Take care. 😊
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Absolutely Mike 😪 , I hear you.
Always a pleasure to read your words my friend.
Thank you 🙏
I wish you the same 🤗
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Congratulations on another powerfully evoked poem, Mike. I truly appreciate your work that always delivers a message not to be missed❣️
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Hi, Cindy. Always a supreme pleasure to see you stop by to say hello. Thanks for your kindness, my friend. 😊
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You’re so very welcome, always, Mike. I always love to see what you have to say❤️
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Congratulations, Mike! “The Trunk” is a very thought-provoking poem.
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Many thanks, Liz. Your support is most definitely appreciated. 😊
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You’re welcome, Mike.
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Congratulations 🙌🏻 keep going on beautiful poem
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Congratulations!
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Thank you so much, Luisa. It’s very kind of you. 😊
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Mike, this is a beautiful piece. It is sentimental and yet carries such a weight. If only we could lock those thoughts away and put them in a box. I understand that heartache that wanting to discard and move on and yet it is so much easily said than done.
All we can do is our best, which is not always as easy and securing a lock. Not only that but is it truly healthy to forget who we are entirely. We are what we are and memories in early years form us in its shape whether it is bits and pieces of moments in a box or just something we see that reminds us of something.
Thank you for sharing this with us on “In A Love World.” Your work never ceases to amaze me. So glad to read you again, an enormous congratulations.
Blessing and hugs my dear friend.
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Thanks a bunch, Joni. Another sinister poem , this one, eh? I liked the imagery–a shadowy, cobwebby attic and a decrepit old trunk with rusted fittings and a lid that just won’t stay shut. Sentient. Hungry. I mentioned over at Manuela’s blog about a former therapist recommending a trunk exercise to help quell negative thoughts and bad memories. Didn’t quite work out, but it gave me this image and I ran with it.
Some things just don’t want to stay quiet. Many things persist for a lifetime. You’re right–we can only do the best we can and try to keep moving forward, as difficult as that may be sometimes.
Thanks for the kind words. Here’s hoping you and Scott have a good rest o’ the week. 😊
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Wonderful writing, Mike! This poem speaks volumes with a minimum of words. I love the trunk analogy, to hide away all the things we don’t want to deal with or don’t want to remember.
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Thanks so much, Peggy. I imagine most of us have a trunk in our own personal closet where we store painful, frightening memories (I think I have several of them). Glad to know you found this poem to your liking, my friend. Enjoy your weekend. 😊
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Blessings and prayers, my friend!
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fabulous! (as always) xx
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Thank you kindly, Linda. Your support is so appreciated, my friend. 😊
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A powerful poem, dear Mike 💕
What struck me most is that the “trunk” is not merely a container of darkness; it is a metaphor for the burdens we carry within ourselves—old wounds, despair, fears, and thoughts we cannot simply throw away. It captures a profound truth: some inner battles are not won by escaping them but by facing them day after day with courage.
It also reminds us that vigilance alone can be exhausting. Healing is not always about keeping the trunk shut; sometimes it begins with understanding what lies inside it. Beneath its dark imagery is a quiet testament to resilience—the determination to keep standing, even when the shadows refuse to leave.
A haunting yet deeply human reflection on the weight of the unseen struggles many people carry in silence.
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Hi, Saima, and thank you for your brilliant and insightful appraisal of this poem. You’re absolutely right, of course–sometimes the contents of our trunks need to be sifted through, rearranged and occasionally discarded. I’m reminded of my childhood when my mom would make me clean my room (the horror!) and I’d have to spend all day digging around everywhere to toss garbage and rearrange stuff. I hated it, but sometimes I’d find things I thought I’d lost, little treasures I’d then store in a safe place. I never did a good job–what little boy has ever been good at cleaning his room?–but it was sort of an exercise in prioritization and putting order to the chaos of a messy life. Counseling has helped me do this as an adult, but there’s always more work to do. Some of that stuff is buried so deeply I may never find it.
It’s always a distinct pleasure to receive your kind support, dear friend. I learn from your wisdom, did you know that? It’s true. So, I hope you’ll continue to share your wise insights with me. 😊
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Dear Mike,
Thank you for such a heartfelt response. Your childhood story made me smile. 😊 There is something wonderfully symbolic about those dreaded room-cleaning days. What feels like a chore at the time often turns out to be an early lesson in life itself—sorting through what matters, letting go of what no longer serves us, and occasionally rediscovering treasures we thought were lost.
I was especially touched by your observation that some things are buried so deeply we may never find them. Perhaps that is true. Yet I sometimes think that the real healing is not always in uncovering every hidden corner, but in learning to live with ourselves gently and compassionately, even when parts of our story remain unseen. We are all works in progress, continuously rearranging the contents of our own trunks as we journey through life.
It is also encouraging to hear how counseling has helped you bring order to some of that inner chaos. Seeking understanding of ourselves takes courage, and the willingness to keep doing that work is something I deeply admire.
And thank you for your incredibly kind words. I am humbled that anything I share resonates with you. The truth is that our conversations often leave me with much to reflect upon as well. That is one of the beautiful things about genuine exchanges—we learn from one another, often without realizing it.
Wishing you many more rediscovered treasures along the way, dear friend. And yes, I will gladly continue sharing my thoughts whenever I can. 🤗💖
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