(c) 2021 by Michael L. Utley
(#28)
Sere crone winter sheds
Iced waraji at the door
Hangs her hiemal veil
On the windows, frigid laugh
Desecrates the sacred place
…..
(#29)
Shima-enaga
Silver-throated winter-borne
Yuki no tori
Huddle in Hokkaido chill
Little clouds alight on branch
…..
(#30)
Weeping winter’s tears
Cannot cloak in drifts the rift
Between earth and man
Frigid hearts and bitter souls
Bury world in human shame
Mike have you seen this blog?
https://wordcraftpoetry.com/
Once a week on Tuesdays they have a “tanka” prompt… I thought you might be interested.
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David
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Hey, David. Thanks for the heads-up! I’m checking out the site right now. It looks pretty interesting. π
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You learn something new every day. Up until this point, I had no idea what a tanka was (which prompted me to look it up). Cheers for the education and job well done, Mike!
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Thanks as always, Rhyan. I really enjoy these Japanese short-form techniques. They force me to condense everything down into the bare basics, so it makes it challenging to present a vivid emotional image that will hopefully make the reader ponder these little moments in time. I’ve been stopped in my tracks numerous times by haiku and tanka written by the old masters (Basho, Issa, et al) due to their striking imagery and emotions tucked into these little packages. It’s a feeling of accidentally stumbling upon something profound, and it can be incredibly satisfying. Anyway, thanks again for the kind comment. I appreciate it. π
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Wonderful, Mike. Love these π
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Thanks, Grace. Much appreciated. π
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My pleasure π
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Love these
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Thanks for your kind words, Saania. I’m glad you liked these. I appreciate it. π
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“Weeping winterβs tears
Cannot cloak in drifts the rift
Between earth and man
Frigid hearts and bitter souls
Bury world in human shame”
Wowππ
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Thank you kindly, Saima. Glad this one found favor with you. π
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